Forgetting to draw the GFs

[Philbro]

xD To the Odin Comment, You would think that they would have a bit of a fight not just odin gets sliced up in half straight away espically at the angle of his gunblade pointing forward. But then again, Odin may of seen alot of battles, he commands courage and he is suppose to be very old, Some peoples theories said he came with the last Luna Cry some say he was there since the begining of Centra xD who knows (rambling now reminds me of Maechen lets talk like him for a while)

"And then the mighty Swordsman Odin the GF with the magical power to Cut his enemies in two pieces stood forward to aid 6 Brave Warriors. As he Went towards the enemy commander....His life was ended. He was the one who was cut in two with a gunblade. Then came a new Ally for the Warriors, The Time Dimension Traveler Gilgamesh. With Odins sword in his hand, he cut through the defence of the Commander and destroyed his evil power. Gilgamesh join the Warriors searching for the next Rift in the Time Dimension Vortex. And that as they say, Is that!"

[deathblade15]

bravo, you're a true scholar. Hmm isn't there usually more though?

[Philbro]

"So you wish to hear more of the brave adventures of the warriors. How about the story of how they first met Odin the great GF?"
*everyone clicks "Yes Please."*
"Ahem.....It was after the Galbindans attempt to destroy the two gardens Tribia and Balamb, and the confrontation at Fishamen Horizon that they stumbled across the ruins of Centra, a City Destroyed by the Luner Cry. The brave warriors felt a force around the area, a force of death. Though many of them did not head the words, a voice boomed to them from the skies above. The voice cried out "I am Odin. This is my Blue Heaven." The warriors stood and stared at each other as the voice boomed out. Then the hunt was on to find where this mysterious voice was coming from. Now Odin wanted to test are brave warriors skills and abilitys. He set them tasks to test there memory and knowledge of the world around us. A simple 6 digit code protected Odin from them. But time was against the warriors, as Odin gave them 20 mins to find and defeat him in battle. They hurried along to a Gargoyle on top of where the door leads to Odin, they picked up the Red Crimson Eye of the Gargoyle and took it with them. They found another statue that had another Eye in it, so they placed the eyes in the secound statue and the gargoyle sang the code. I do believe the code has left my mind, I will try and think on what it was. Anyways as the Brave warriors hurried to the other gargoyle, they saw that the door was not open still but the code must be imputed somewhere. Time was against them still. They ran back to the secound gargoyle statue and took both eye's out. They went to the first and placed them in. The flames grew on one of the torches and they saw numbers. They spoke each number of the code out one by one and the door to Odin opened. They ran inside and Odin greated them, "You have done well to reach this far, let us fight with honour." and the battle began. The warriors defeated odin and as there reward, Odin became there Ally. And that as they say, is that."

[deathblade15]

I see a lot of spell errors oh wise Maechan jr. If you have more to tell, I'd appreciate it.

[Mile]

Originally Posted by deathblade15

I see a lot of spell errors oh wise Maechan jr. If you have more to tell, I'd appreciate it.

Isn't it "spelling errors" ? English is not my primary language but "spell errors" doesn't sound right to my ear ;)

Story is great, keep going if you can

[Philbro]

"Ah yes, I am suppose to act old and thought I would make some mistakes (excuse xD). Anyways more information on the GF you say. How about the Deep Sea Research Centre where the legendary GF Bahamut was tested on. Many people thought that he is the King of all the GF and perhaps you could say he is. But there was another. One that many people never believed existed. This GF was named Eden. Some argue over the gender of this GF, but as eye witnesses state, it is of a female nature. Though I myself have not seen such a thing, the legend goe's that aswell as testing on Bahamut in this lab, they tested on what they would call the Ultimate Weapon. This was where the research began when the Sorceress War was in full swing. The excavating of the rich ore in the Deep Sea Research was one that I myself am amazed to hear about. After long years, they finished there creation by drawing a power from a powerful Sorceress inside this machine. This is what is rumoured one of the reasons how the GF, Eden, was born. After the complitation, they tested there Ultimate Weapon and found it was too dangerous. An evacuation was ordered and only the leader must stay behind, a Warrior of sorts. He confronted the beast but was slain by the most powerfulest blow anyone has seen since.... oh I do believe I am getting ahead of myself here. Anyways after that they locked the Deep Sea Research Centre down using special energy units. Only those who knew the distribution of the units could access where they sealed there Ultimate Weapon. The Sorceress who gave this weapon power turned into a GF and only those who dare to venture into this dark place can find such power. As for Bahamut, he is still kept inside, waiting for the day of his release. Or is he just merely waiting for the right time to get his revenge on the race who damned him. Who knows what will happen. And that as they say, is that."

(excuse grammer xD)